Latest Query for Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy

Here is my latest attempt. Trying to tweek the hook line a tad.

Dear Agent,

Cursed with eyes made of mirrors and hunted by two warring kingdoms, and that’s a good day. You still have to battle a God.

For over two thousand years a prophecy has foretold of the God Leto’s domination over the realm. Now the Archmage Azrael prepares to challenge destiny, and end Leto’s plans of hegemony.

The world is changing due to Leto’s involvement in the politics of the realm leading to open war across the continent. He awaits the coming of his prophesied avatar who also happens to be Azrael’s own protégé, Isidora. When Isidora returns to Azrael’s tower after a five-year absence, more matured and asking for aid to increase her powers,  he knows the time of prophecy has come.

With the freedom of the world and the stability of the pantheon of Gods at stake, the Archmage and his protégé travel across a world on the brink of war. In a chess match involving Lords, Kings, and Gods, Azrael can only hope he can remain one step ahead by interpreting the prophecy correctly, and save Isidora and the world in the process.

SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT: DAWN OF PROPHECY is an epic fantasy and is complete at 98,300 words. It can appeal to adult readers who are fans of novels containing intricate political intrigue, a defined system of magic and  a polytheistic hierarchy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.