Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Query Revision #13: Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy


Dear Agent,

If being the last of an immortal race does not make the Archmage Azrael unique, possessing eyes made of mirrors makes him unforgettable.  

Those strange eyes have shown him plenty. Every move, every action, every thought; Azrael has carefully calculated over the past two thousand years. Yet he has watched  people die around him, nations rise and fall, and loved ones wrenched away; never to be seen again. Despite all that, Azrael never lost his focus; to protect his protégé, Isidora, from her fate.

Now a time of turmoil has begun once again. While attempting to aid Isidora on a quest to become a more powerful mage, Azrael finds himself thrown into the treacherous gauntlet of world politics. His careful planning unravels, and now Azrael is hunted by two warring kingdoms.

It doesn’t help that a God is behind all of it, and plans to make Isidora his chosen avatar to spearhead his campaign of domination.

With the freedom of the world and the stability of the pantheon of Gods at stake, the Archmage and his protégé travel across a world on the brink of war. In a chess match involving Lords, Kings, and Gods; Azrael only hopes he can remain one step ahead, and save Isidora and the world in the process.

SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT: DAWN OF PROPHECY is an epic fantasy and is complete at 98,300 words. It will appeal to mature readers who are fans of intricate political intrigue, a defined system of magic and a polytheistic hierarchy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Friday, August 17, 2012

Query revision #12. (thank you AQCers)


Dear Agent,

When the Archmage Azrael attempts to prevent a bloody conflict, his intentions his were not to kill his protégé’s father.

Every move, every action, every thought; Azrael has carefully calculated over the past two thousand years. He has watched as people die around him, as nations rise and fall, and as loved ones are wrenched away from him; never to be seen again. Even when cursed with eyes made of mirrors, he never lost his focus.

Now a time of turmoil has arisen. While attempting to aid his protégé, Isidora, on a quest to become a more powerful mage, Azrael finds himself thrown into the treacherous gauntlet of world politics. His careful planning unravels, and now Azrael is hunted by two warring kingdoms.

It doesn’t help that a God is behind all of it, and plans to make Isidora his chosen avatar to spearhead his campaign of domination.

With the freedom of the world and the stability of the pantheon of Gods at stake, the Archmage and his protégé travel across a world on the brink of war. In a chess match involving Lords, Kings, and Gods, Azrael only hopes he can remain one step ahead, and save Isidora and the world in the process.

SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT: DAWN OF PROPHECY is an epic fantasy and is complete at 98,300 words. It will appeal to mature readers who are fans of intricate political intrigue, a defined system of magic and a polytheistic hierarchy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

A little philosophical rant I penned a few back.


It is 11:30PM and I should be heading off to slumber for I have work in the morning. As usual before bed my mind starts tumbling about discussions I have had that day with friends and family and the unending stream of news I have seen on the wonderful and completely unbiased media we have in our world which feeds us which seems like honest reporting and indoctrinating into our minds what is right. Of course this is sarcasm, just like everything else in life any kind of information is skewed and contorted by the eye of the beholder and a point of view, which by the by is only right or wrong depending on which side of the proverbial fence you sit on that gives you that point of view. On this night I have decided to do which I have always told myself to do but always found some excuse or distraction that prevents me from doing so, I am writing it down and not only writing it down but hopefully sharing it with others around me.

On this particular night the string of discussions and past discussions that set off this domino effect of firing synapses in my mind are unusual for me. The first being a discussion with my brother. Now at this moment he is going through a difficult set of circumstances that would by right make anyone feel depressed and moody. Out of respect for my brother's privacy I am not going to describe his current problem but I can still go into the broader scope of my philosophical musing without breaking that privacy.

The course of our discussion brought us to the topic of self-confidence. I for a long time have been a person of extreme self-confidence. This self-confidence does not come from a string of successes and accomplishment when in fact I have made many mistakes in my life and continue making some mistakes that although are disappointing have not and hopefully will never allow me to lose confidence in myself. My brother on the other hand does not have this same trait. He, to be totally honest, has made far fewer mistakes in his life than I have and although he is four years my junior has experienced many things in life that I have at this time been unable to experience. Most people looking at us can see the familial relation and can see we are not that different in appearance save the fact he is thinner than I am. Then how, I found myself asking, do I have more self-confidence than he does when he has his whole life ahead of him and with knowing the events I have gone through in my life a better head start than I had?

I explained to my brother that with his particular problem as well as just about everything one does in the course of his life is decided by how much of the said confidence one has. Any professional athlete will tell you that if they did not have the confidence in their ability, skill, or what have you they would never have been able to reach the heights of success they currently possess. Of course we cannot fool ourselves to believe that confidence alone will bring success, happiness, and fulfillment however we can say with a fair amount of certainty that ability without the confidence to utilize that ability will definitely slow, curb, or completely shut down any hope of success. Therefore one can rightfully come to the conclusion that confidence plays a large part of moving forward in life. This or course as I said earlier is the confidence in one's self.

This query inexorably lead me to the deeper question of 'what is self'? The word confidence is for the most part easily understood and if you go with the face value of the prefix 'self' it is simply confidence in one's self which is merely answering a question using the same word that fashioned the original question. Does self simply convey the meaning 'me'? What does that mean? Does it mean the 'self' I see in the mirror? Is the 'self' I fashion in my own mind which just like the aforementioned media is completely skewed by my own point of view or is 'self' in fact the complete contradictory by being defined by the way the world views me which is also skewed multiple times like a proverbial kaleidoscope by a multitude of point of views of all the people I come in contact on a daily basis? Either way I come upon a conundrum of conscience by realizing something that should be as simple as 'self' becomes vague, hazy, and a philosophical and perhaps unsure term.

The only point of reference I can use is my categorically and systematically attempting to break down what my own "self" is while forcing myself to do this in an unbiased fashion. Merriam Webster defines self as the following:

1 a: the entire person of an individual b: the realization or embodiment of an abstraction
2 a (1): an individual's typical character or behavior <her true="" self="" was="" revealed=""> (2): an individual's temporary behavior or character <his better="" self=""> b: a person in prime condition <feel like="" my="" old="" self="" today="">
3: the union of elements (as body, emotions, thoughts, and sensations) that constitute the individuality and identity of a person
4: personal interest or advantage
5: material that is part of an individual organism <ability of="" the="" immune="" system="" to="" distinguish="" self="" from="" nonself="">

All of these are fair definitions, the first being the most concise "the entire person of an individual". I say this because all of those definitions utilize the word or form of the word individual. However they do not answer the question what is self for they merely replace that word with the word individual which is defined as the following:

1 obsolete : inseparable
2 a: of, relating to, or distinctively associated with an individual <an individual="" effort=""> b: being an individual or existing as an indivisible whole c: intended for one person <an individual="" serving="">
3: existing as a distinct entity : separate
4: having marked individuality <an individual="" style="">

Now I know I may be completely boring any reader of this to tears with the definitions but they must be addressed in order to show how we are seemingly unable to define the terms. Self is an individual and an individual is something inseparable, whole, and a distinct entity. Therefore this tells us each person is in no uncertain terms completely different from every other person which in of itself is a total fallacy. While it is clearly obvious that human beings are genetically and physically unique from one another we all should be plainly aware that self is a state of mind, which unless we were all born in a bubble thoroughly devoid of any human contact, is a series of learned, copied, and conglomeration of those raising us, those we come in contact with, and all the events we experience with those variables.

So with that being said how is "self" the embodiment or entirety of a solitary individual? Our brain soaks up information, images, ideas, experiences from the countless of other "selves" we come in contact with, observe, and either dispose of or emulate who have soaked up those particular bits of information, images, ideas, experiences from even more other "selves" so on and so forth ad infinitum. It is not logical to say "self" is synonymous with individuality. The only true "self" or "individual" would be someone who not only has never had any type of contact with lifeforms, places, or things but would also embody every type of trait a human being can have all at the same time and space because only then would that person be a "whole". We cannot be whole if we are an amalgam of traits and personalities of what we picked up as we go through life discarding or emulating whichever traits and personalities we see fit to define ourselves because we are nothing more than a patchwork of prior people.

This leads us further down the rabbit hole because we come to the realization that we are not unique but rather we are not unlike a Mr. Potato Head filling the daireair of our spud like cores with this or that part we like the most and sticking on the angry eyes or the full lips depending on the situation before us without realizing everyone else is drawing those parts from the same basket. What also destroys the concept of self even more is that not a one of us can wear all those parts at the same time to be a "whole" we can only mix and match the parts to best fit into our society every now and then using a different part to make us just a little different so we can feel special and not just a part of the crowd. 

Ah ha! The word that has been waiting to peak its ugly head finally did so in that last musing; society. Society, whichever one you are a part of, is the embodiment of the anti-self. It is what many times decides for us which parts are best for us to draw from that basket and is indoctrinated in our minds from birth. It is what is described by many as the destroyer of self, forcing people to conform to this or that standard. If we think this through logically this cannot be true either. All society is a basket of parts that is not infinite, meaning it can only hold so many parts. However if you look to the basket to the left or the right it has some parts the last basket does not have and so forth. Once you make your way around through all the baskets you realize that every single part is there just in different baskets. You can simply move to the next basket of the last one does not suit you. The only people that have a problem with this are those that want to wear every part simultaneously which we have already concluded is impossible for a human being to do or those that do not have the means or the will power to move to the next basket. While the latter is unfortunate it must be understood that again none of those parts are truly yours to begin with, they were all laid out there from those before us.

Unfortunately I must end this rant at this time. It has become far too late into the night for me to continue this. My only hope is that I can retain enough of my train of thought to continue this on the morrow. For those that read, I bid you adieu for now.

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Synopsis- Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy



SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT
Book one- DAWN OF PROPHECY
Synopsis

ISIDORA and SIR GIDEON STORMCALLER, arrive on the Isle of Winds after their trip from the Kingdom of Castellamar. Gideon is notably nervous, for he is going to be meeting Isidora’s teacher in the Art of magic, AZRAEL, for the first time.

Azrael, Isidora, Gideon, and the deamoness LEAR’ZA,  meet in the library. Isidora continues to explain her desire to become a Summoner, and that she requires Azrael’s assistance.

After a discussion, Isidora confirms she believes they will find her first Hero Spirit at the site of an ancient battle from the sacrifice of Sir Reginald Tempest. They deduce that the site of the battle is in the middle of the vast Ranian Desert, in the Ruins of Al’Zadal.

The quartet depart Azrael’s tower, and make way for the port to take their intended route though the land of the Elves in Luminos. During their trip to the port, they run across an acquaintance of Azrael’s, a pixie by the name of TALIA. Azrael deduces they are not alone, and are being followed.

The group of now five companions, leaves the Isle of Winds aboard a ship taking them to the shores of the Evening Lands and Luminos. Upon arrival, they are greeted by armed guards who take them into custody, and escort them to the king of the Elves, The Guardian of Light Giasis. The Guardian insists his ranger nephew, KETHIS KITHARII, joins Azrael’s group.

Meanwhile, Gideon’s uncle LORD SULIK, is planning to provoke war between the Kingdom of Castellamar and the Spokes, run by LORD DAMIAN HOLLISTER. His plans also include involvement by the Elves.

Azrael and his companions make their way through the forest, and arrive at the desert city of Tunai, on the edges of the Ranian Desert. A sellsword named JOZEF SHADDAM, offers his service in their quest, and also informs them of events placing the world on the brink of war.

After a hard trip through the desert, they arrive at the Ruins of Al’Zadal, where they are nearly killed by supernatural forces sent upon them by THE GOD OF CHAOS LETO.  Talia sacrifices herself to save Azrael. After a harrowing battle, Isidora gains her first HERO SPIRIT.

With their quest completed, Gideon and Isidora turn their attention to the turmoil back home in Castellamar. Azrael and the rest of the group, accompany them back to the Kingdom. Upon arrival, they find out that Castellamar, and the Spokes, are on the verge of war after two hundred years of peace.

Azrael volunteers to be an emissary to end the conflict. After meeting with Lord Hollister, the hopes of a peaceful resolution are promising. The two warring factions meet on the Plains of Asgerd outside the Spokes to parley. In an act of treachery, Isidora’s father, LORD GRIFFON SHADOWBANE, who accompanied Azrael, attempts to murder Lord Hollister’s nephew and heir. Azrael’s efforts to stop him end in Lord Griffon’s death.

Azrael’s actions are taken as a sign of war by Castellamar and they attack and war erupts. Isidora watches from the other side of the battlefield, and is horrified by her teacher’s actions. Lord Hollister, upset at what he perceives as Azrael’s failings, orders the Archmage arrested. Azrael, Lear’Za, and Jozef flee the battle.

Azrael, enraged by the unexpected and horrific outcome of his attempt at peace, draws the attention of his nemesis, Leto. Leto and Azrael prepare for a confrontation, but are then disengaged by the other Gods. His confidence reaffirmed, Azrael leaves the Evening Lands with Lear’Za and Jozef to refocus a new plan.

Isidora returns to Castellamar to learn the worship of the God Leto, while Gideon wages war leading the forces of Castellamar. It is revealed to Isidora that she is a daughter of a Goddess, and part of a prophecy in which she becomes an Avatar of the God Leto. The same prophecy her teacher and mentor, Azrael, has been attempting to thwart.

Yet another attempt. Revision 11 of my query for Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy


Dear Agent,

In an attempt to stop a bloody conflict,  killing his protégé’s father was not part of the Archmage Azrael’s plan. 

Every move, every action, every thought, Azrael has carefully calculated over the passed two thousand years. He has watched people die around him, nations rise and fall, loved ones wrenched away from him, never to be seen again. Even when he was cursed with eyes made of mirrors, he never lost his focus.

Now a time of turmoil has once again begun. While attempting to aid his protégé Isidora on a quest to become a more powerful mage,  Azrael finds himself thrown into the treacherous gauntlet of world politics. His careful planning unravels, and Azrael is placed the the unteneable position of being hunted by two warring kingdoms.

It doesn’t help that a God is behind all of it, and plans to take Isidora as his chosen avatar to spearhead his campaign of domination.

With the freedom of the world and the stability of the pantheon of Gods at stake, the Archmage and his protégé travel across a world on the brink of war. In a chess match involving Lords, Kings, and Gods, Azrael can only hope he can remain one step ahead, and save Isidora and the world in the process.

SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT: DAWN OF PROPHECY is an epic fantasy and is complete at 98,300 words. It can appeal to adult readers who are fans of novels containing intricate political intrigue, a defined system of magic and  a polytheistic hierarchy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Monday, August 13, 2012

Latest Query for Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy

Here is my latest attempt. Trying to tweek the hook line a tad.


Dear Agent,

Cursed with eyes made of mirrors and hunted by two warring kingdoms, and that’s a good day. You still have to battle a God.

For over two thousand years a prophecy has foretold of the God Leto’s domination over the realm. Now the Archmage Azrael prepares to challenge destiny, and end Leto’s plans of hegemony.

The world is changing due to Leto’s involvement in the politics of the realm leading to open war across the continent. He awaits the coming of his prophesied avatar who also happens to be Azrael’s own protégé, Isidora. When Isidora returns to Azrael’s tower after a five-year absence, more matured and asking for aid to increase her powers,  he knows the time of prophecy has come.

With the freedom of the world and the stability of the pantheon of Gods at stake, the Archmage and his protégé travel across a world on the brink of war. In a chess match involving Lords, Kings, and Gods, Azrael can only hope he can remain one step ahead by interpreting the prophecy correctly, and save Isidora and the world in the process.

SOULS OF MAGIC’S NIGHT: DAWN OF PROPHECY is an epic fantasy and is complete at 98,300 words. It can appeal to adult readers who are fans of novels containing intricate political intrigue, a defined system of magic and  a polytheistic hierarchy.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sunday, August 12, 2012

Opening chapters of a vampire novel in progress. Legecy of Sin


Chapter 1
The lights…it was the one thing that never ceased to amaze him. From his window of his office atop the Sears Tower he looked down upon the city of Chicago. The cars zipped along the Eisenhower Expressway, looking like tiny fireflies making their way through the night. From one corner to another, everything was lit up and that was a sight that, no matter how many times Alexi saw it, would always intrigue him. Perhaps it was the fact that he had not seen a sunrise for nearly eight centuries. The human race had come so far in that time, hell they had come so far in the past 50 years, and he had witnessed it all…being a vampire had its privileges. However he would give it all up for one sunrise, all the knowledge, all the events of history he knew for facts first hand that the history books had wrongly accounted. Shaking his head he went back to his desk.
Sitting back he tilted his head and stared at the desk’s fine oak finish. All the finery he had. This office, in the largest office building in the world, was not inexpensive. His suit of fine silk, Armani, it cost more than most everyday humans made in a month. Immortality allowed for such riches to be amassed. At this point he had so much money, there was no need to even keep a balance, although he had always had a human accountant take care of things. He had everything except a pulse. A low growl surged in his throat, and with the gold letter opener that sat upon desk he violently slashed at his left wrist. He watched as the skin spilt open and the bright crimson blood started to flow. A few drops hit the desk, and just as quickly as he cut himself the wound sealed seamlessly as if the cut never happened. The drops of blood that hit the desk started to smoke and evaporated like water on a hot pan. Staring at his wrist he murmured to himself, This is how you remind me of what I really am.
He knew that his only option out of this reality was a vampire’s death, which at his age there was only really one tried and true method, the sunlight. The younger Ones could be dispatched with a stake in the heart and fire, but after eight hundred years of hunting and drinking blood, Alexi would not die by those methods. Perhaps decapitation and dismemberment together with burning his remains would kill him, but he was not ready to find out.  As much as he loathed his existence, a vampire’s greatest instinct is survival.
Shaking his head he tried to remove all the thoughts of regret and the past. Perhaps the fact that soon it would all come to a head was making him reminisce. He wondered if all those humans in their cars on the street below realized how close they are to almost total annihilation, slavery for the rest. It would be decided most likely in the next week, and all that stood between this tragedy and its master was Alexi. Alexi Zhamnov, descendant of the Ukraine, brother to the One who sought to enslave this world. Thinking of his brother Sergei and what was soon to come, Alexi could not help but once again delve into the past.  Swiveling his soft leather chair, he pushed a button and his computer came to life. He would scribe this, his story and his brother’s. Soon enough the mortal world and immortal may very well go through a drastic change, so someone had to recount what led up to it.
His fingers raced across the keyboard, fervent little tap-a-tap sounds filling the office. A story his size would take a mortal months to recount, but with his preternatural powers, he would finish this on this night.



Chapter 2
I could begin with our childhood, the fun years where we played in the fields, when we first forged metal with our father, when our world was innocent. However those years, as happy as they were, were no different than any other child’s life in any age. I opt instead to begin when our world drastically changed, when the set of events took place to where all I knew in life completely did a one hundred and eighty degree spin.
The year was 1237, the year of my twenty-first birthday as well as that of my twin Sergei. Our family was not rich we were not nobility, but we made our living off the small parcel of land we tended in the countryside of the Ukraine. There were five in my little family, my brother and I, our mother and father, and our darling little sister Anastasia. By trade my father was a blacksmith, and Sergei and I were learning that trade. We were old enough now to start thinking of creating our own families, to take on a wife and raise children. Although not luxurious and not always comfortable, we were content with our lot in life.
Separated from most of the world in our little niche in the Ukraine, news traveled slow, however we heard rumors about barbarian hordes from the east that threatened our borders. It was then my father’s craft turned from pots and pans and mending plows, to forging swords for the village. Simple farmers we were, stupid we were not. The village prepared for war.  I had never raised a weapon upon my fellow man; I hoped I was prepared for the task. My father had told me that when confronted with death, the human spirit can do amazing things galvanize itself from the horrors it will commit in the name of survival.
The moment finally came in fall after the harvest. The air had a bite to it, but the first snow was yet to settle. Sergei and I were cleaning the forgery; my father was off to the market to get some more supplies. Mother and Anastasia were in the house, preparing supper. Sergei and I joked as we cleaned, the harvest was a good one, and our family had made enough money from farming and the smithing for us to live comfortably. We dreamed that maybe our father would allow us to go to the University in Moscow. As much as we loved our family and our lives, we had always dreamed of more. However this was just that, a joke, for we knew our father would never allow it. We had a trade and an obligation to our family and village. We turned our heads as we heard hoof beats approaching. Not a slow trot, but a fierce gallop. We ran from the forgery out to the road and saw our father riding furiously he sword drawn.
As he came closer we noticed his left arm was limp, blood running from his bicep. They helped him from his horse as he approached. Sergei was pale, his face a mask of fear. I was the first to speak.
“Father, what has happened? Who did this?”
“Our fears my sons have come to fruition. The Golden Horde has arrived! The market place in is ruins, the barters slain.”
The Golden Horde…the barbarian invaders from the east. Mongols, when they came they conquered. The vanquished were not treated kindly. The men were slaughtered, and the woman raped and made slaves. 
“Then we will do what we must father.”
“Alexi, gather the swords and bring them to the village square. I will call our neighbors. Sergei, gather you mother and sister and bring them to the cellar. We have little time; they were not far behind me. Move boys!”
Sergei stared blankly for a moment; I grabbed him by the arm and took him away. Once we were back at the forge I shook him and looked into his eyes.
“Sergei now is not the time for this. Forget your fears, we must move.”
“The Horde brother! The Horde! They are not just regular barbarians! We will not survive!”
“Standing in fear will surely bring about our demise Sergei! If we stand and fight we at least have a chance. Do as father said, bring mother and Anastasia to the cellar.”
He stumbled backwards for a moment, then turned and ran for the house. I quickly loaded the small wagon with the swords and dragged it out to the square. When I arrived, father was there with most of the town’s men. Silently I help him pass out the swords to them. No sooner had the last one left my hand, we heard the hoof beats like thunder. I looked around for my brother, and did not see him anywhere. Perhaps it was better he hid in the cellar with mother, if we all survived; it would not be well for him with the villagers…and father.
We stood fast, our swords upraised, awaiting their arrival. They swept in like a storm. Dust clouds burst from the horse’s hooves. The sound of clanging steel erupted in my skull. To this day, I can still see it clearly, playing out like an image from the modern day televisions. I watched men die, men I grew up with, friends and neighbors. My own sword was red with blood from some of the barbarians. One beast of a man leaped from his horse on to me. The stench of him was too much to bear. With a yell I kicked him off and faced him with my stained sword. I parried his attack; it nearly knocked me from my feet, as my hand rung with the vibrations of the blow. His next swing grazed my leg, and I fell in agony. Blood gushed from the wound. Time slowed to a crawl, I lay on the ground and waited for his to sword impale my chest. I saw him above me, this beast of a man, his body clothed his furs. His narrow eyes looked down upon me, a cruel grin upon his face. The grin soon became a grimace. His eyes grew wide and looked down. I followed his eyes to his own chest where a sword tip protruded. His wide eyes glazed over and went blank, as he slid off and fell to the side, his body slumping dead to the ground. Where he once stood was my father, his hand outstretched to me.
I could barely hear him over the din of the battle. I knew my body was in shock, and his words sounded like mumbling to me. I saw him pointing to the house, his words became a little clearer. He was telling me to flee to the cellar. I could not leave him… I dare not. I grabbed my sword and took a step forward, my leg gave out and I fell to my knee, my father holding me under my arm. I knew I could not remain in the battle. I would get myself killed and hinder my father. I gave him a hug and kissed his cheek, and stumbled off. I ran half limping to the cellar, the pain shooting up my leg. I fell quite a few times. I called for my brother. The cellar door popped up and Sergei came out to me, tears in his face. Then I heard the scream. We both looked up and saw the vision of terror. Through al the bodies we could see him clearly, our father with a sword protruding from his abdomen. The cruel barbarian pulled out the sword and my father fell to his knees clutching his belly, blood coming from between his fingers. He looked our way then, I could see the look in his eyes, the sadness and the pain.
I think I screamed at that point, lying on the ground with Sergei above me. My heart exploded with the pain and my eyes flooding with tears. I did not hear my scream, which was because Sergei’s was louder. It seemed every ounce of energy he had was poured into the mournful wail, which caused me more pain than my father’s death. I was even more shocked when Sergei picked up my sword and ran headlong into the battle. This was devastating. I could not allow him in there alone. Tearing a piece of my shirt I wrapped it around my leg and hobbled towards him. I looked for Sergei, but could see nothing except a blur of a man enraged, sword-flaying slicing everything in sight. Barbarians fell, some missing limbs, others mortally wounded. That man was Sergei. My father’s words came back to me then, ‘When confronted with death, the human spirit can do amazing things galvanize itself from the horrors it will commit in the name of survival.’
Grabbing a discarded sword I made my way toward him. We stood back to back, our swords dancing. The tide was turning somewhat, and through a clearing I saw my father lying on the ground. I stumbled towards him and knelt down holding his head. The tears came once again. He looked up his eyes glassy.
“Alexi…my son…the village is lost my brave boy. You must…you must take our family away…leave now…take them to Provia…the city is well defended and they will have more…more of a chance…”
He grimaced and clutched his belly harder. I wept more shaking my head. “I can not leave you father!”
“My time has come Alexi…all that matters now is our family’s safety…grieve not for me and do…do what must be done…NOW GO!”
Weeping I nodded. His eyes glazed and then stared blank. He was gone. Closing his eyes I looked for Sergei. There he was fighting still, his arms covered in blood. Grabbing him, he spun in a fury, his sword almost striking me. I dragged him away.
“Sergei! Father is gone. His last request was for us to flee with mother and Ana to Provia. We must leave now, while they do not notice.”
“No!!! I will slay them all Alexi! I will not leave!”
“The village is lost Sergei! We will die a pointless death, and then leave mother and Ana undefended. The time for retreat has come. It was father’s wish.”
I could see the tears in his eyes, and hugged him. Together we ran to the house and got two horses. Getting mother and Ana, we galloped away from the burning village heading west to Provia.

Saturday, August 11, 2012

Chapter 1 Preview of Souls of Magic's Night: Dawn of Prophecy- Completed Manuscript


Chapter 1

The river of time flows ever on
Its twists and turns change the view
However, not the course it bears.
For a pebble thrown into its waters
Creates beautiful ripples and eddies.
However, the mighty river flows ever on.
All hope one day to be the one.
Who can alter, reverse, or stop its rapids?
Until that day, the river flows ever on.
A loud steady clap interrupted Malystrix’s gentle singing as she rocked in her chair and idly knitted. Normally, such an intrusion to someone who has lived in utter solitude for over two millennia would be welcome; however, Malystrix knew there was only one being that could accomplish that feat. It was the one being that she held the most contempt and hatred for; the God of Chaos Leto.
“Such a memorizing and scintillating hymn my dear. It nearly stilled my eternal heart.” The air before Malystrix shimmered briefly, and the golden outline of the God stood before her. She did not cease her knitting. She continued rocking; her long auburn hair softly outlined her ever youthful and round face.
“Why thank you my Lord, I am eternally grateful for such praise. I will make sure it comforts me during these next millennia of exile you have so generously bestowed upon me.”
The golden outline flared in anger. “You dare mock me? It was insubordination such as this that put you in this predicament!”
Malystrix’s hands clenched momentarily, but her voice remained even; calm. “I am still at a loss understanding how refusing your advances are considered insubordination. You cannot and will not ever force me to love you Leto.”
The arm of the golden outline shot outward and Malystrix was thrown to the wall, her body held against it as if held by her throat. “You are a minor goddess Malystrix and as such under my command! I do not know why I bother it seems two thousand years has still not rid you of the filth of mortal love.”
Although pinned against the wall her face remained passive. “Even our siblings disagree with this.”
“Disagree they may, however, they know that by Divine Law, they cannot stop me, I am well within my rights. You brought shame on us all with your heretical dalliance.”
“Love is not a dalliance my Lord. Perhaps if you understood that you could have won my heart long before. The other Gods understand this, and that is why I suffer my exile gladly knowing my love still exists in other forms.”
Leto’s hold on Malystrix loosened allowing her to slump to the floor. “Ahh you speak of your half-breed  child. Even that is allowed by my good graces.”
“Your brother and sister allowed it not you.”
“How wrong you are my dear. Your river of time has sped up dramatically Malystrix. Even in mortal reckoning the time of the Prophecy is at hand. As we speak events transpire that are leading to my inevitable and triumphant outcome. My complete victory is ensured! Your half breed is unknowingly playing the part I had intended all along.”
Calmly, Malystrix picked up her knitting needles and sat back in her rocking chair. “He will stop you.”
The golden outline flared once again not in anger but in triumph. “He cannot stop me. The fool is but a pebble in your river Malystrix. He is trapped in the prophecy and soon enough he will realize that he too is merely playing a part that will lead to his unraveling and my ultimate triumph. The next time I return my dear will be in victory, and then you can choose to finally see my greatness or rot in this emptiness for all eternity!”
The golden outline disappeared. Malystrix’s steady hands lifted the blanket she had finally finished for the uncounted number of times. “He will stop you.” Smiling in satisfaction, she began unraveling it as she continued humming the hymn she started before the unwanted interruption.

Short Story- Apprentice Folly


I am a dead man.
The words rang through Darius’ head as he stumbled through the dark cavern. His black hair hung around his shoulders, wet from perspiration. The apprentice robes he wore, those of white, where stained and torn from this perilous journey he took. He was starting to have second thoughts about his motives for being in the dark and foul cave.
The young mage was only months away from graduating his apprenticeship, and would soon be a full magi. He had only one test to complete and it would be his. Is it worth it?  His confidence had always been shaky, ever since his father had sent him to the school for aspiring magi, especially this particular school which was for those of the white robes. They had taught him nothing about true power in magic, only lessons of honor and patience along with a few pitiful spells.
Damn them!  The curse echoed in his mind as he tore his robes from a jagged rock under foot. He continued on, his torch giving little light. He did not enough dried agu root to cast a light spell. He hoped he found what he sought soon.
Darius first heard rumors of the cave during a recess from class one afternoon. Master Filosar was speaking with a few other white robed colleagues outside by the small grove of willow trees. The day was pleasant, so most huddled in small groups under the warm spring time sun. Darius had few friends, most stayed away from the rat faced looking boy, speaking in hushed tones when he walked by, followed by laughter.
 He ignored most of it, and spent most of his time ease dropping on the hierarchy of teachers hoping to find some hints on anything he would possibly need to know in any of his studies. On this particular day he heard something.
“The students seem quite eager this year Master Filosar.”
That was the rotund Master Gravius, professor of herb lore at the academy. His robes barely fit him, at it seemed he grew fatter by the minute. Darius always grimaced when he was around him, the odors of a fat man’s body along with the pungent smells of the many different herbs and components the man worked with. Master Filosar turned his slim face with a smile, the sun reflecting off his bald scalp.
“Yes Master Gravius, it does seem we have quite a few adept magi in the making. We may gain some ground on those of the darker persuasion this year.”
“Speaking of the dark robes, I certainly hope that cavern was sealed off. Damn them and their evil magic’s. They tainted these parts those few years ago.”
“I sealed it personally my old friend. The only key to open it lies in my study. A small black rock cut from the opening, placed inside the gap into the face of the cave opens the door. The foul magic there would not permit any of us to completely seal it, so we had to settle for locking it. However, what sees all, but allows none to see remains locked inside. No one will gain access to the charm ever again.”
“I hope so; its magic is far too tempting, even to those of us of the white robes. I have a class soon my friend, I must be leaving. I will see you at the auxiliary meeting tomorrow afternoon. Good day sir.”
“Good day Gravius”
Darius smiled widely as the two men took leave of each other. So they hide the true power from us! Darius rubbed his hands together. He had to find this charm. Certainly no little bauble could be that evil. He would merely find it and use it towards his finals, if it truly saw all; it must be able to help him in his exams. I wonder what they meant by allows none to see though? Darius shrugged and ran off to his next class, all the while dreaming about this new discovery.
The next few days dragged on with droning boredom for Darius. He hadn’t the opportunity to search out the key, Master Filosar seemed to be almost living in his study, and finals were only a week away. He had to find out at least where in his study he kept the key, that way when he went to snatch it, he wouldn’t have to search and possibly get caught. He decided to feign a reason to speak with the Master in his study, and he would have to do it soon.
The next morning before classes, Darius went to Master Filosar’s study and knocked on the door. Darius smiled thinly as the Master bellowed enter. Darius walked in and flashed the teacher a wide and warm smile full of innocence. He sat down in the chair across from the Master who sat behind his large oak desk.
“Can I help you Darius?”
“Umm, yes Master Filosar. I was wondering…umm” Darius eyes darted around the room looking for something or somewhere that would reveal the key to the cave. The Master has said it was a small black rock. There was nothing on his desk save for a few scrolls and a spell jar. The book shelf was crowded with books. Then there was always his filing drawer… Darius looked back at the Master knowing he was taking too long to answer the man.
“I was wondering, if you knew…excuse me, had a book I could use?” Filosar looked at the young puzzled for a moment then smiled again.
“I have many books young man, any one in particular?”
Again Darius eyes searched the room. Damn it! Where is this thing hiding!
Actually there is one in particular. You see, I have a friend…and acquaintance that has a charm that was passed down in his family. He is a religious person….a…” Darius was starting sweat, and was sure the Master knew what his motives were. Get a hold of yourself you dolt! Just calm down and act like nothing is going on, you are just here to borrow a book! Darius took a breath and smiled again at the Master.
“What I am trying to say is he is an acolyte in the church, planning on becoming a priest. He didn’t want an old family heirloom that may be evil making a bad impression upon him to the temple. He asked me if I could find anything out about the charm…find out if it is a good charm or an evil one.”
“Well Darius, you could always bring the charm here and I could…”
“No!” Darius realized he yelled that too loudly and composed himself again. “I’m..I’m sorry sir; I just meant that I was wishing to conduct this study on my own…to further my skills”
“I see.” The Master studied Darius for a moment and then flashed him another warm smile. “I think I may just the tome for you.” Master Filosar rose from his desk and began to browse through the many books on the book shelf behind the desk.
While the Master had his back turned to him, Darius once again searched the room with his eyes for the key. Where is it! His eyes settled on the Master back and then above him. On the top of the book shelf was a row of rocks, all different shapes, and colors. Most were quite exquisite, quartz and precious stones. One however, was quite plain and gaudy looking. A plain black rock… That’s it! Almost as if the Master heard Darius’ thoughts, he spun around, but then smiled again.
“Here it is Darius. Most extensive, has most of the evil and dark objects we have on record here at the school. If this charm of your friend’s is indeed evil, it should be in these pages. God speed young man, and I hope this helps your…friend.”
“Thank you sir. I appreciate your help greatly. I will return this as soon as my study is complete.” Darius ran out of the room clutching the book top his chest, a wide grin on his face. He day dreamed through the rest of the day waiting for the chance to research the charm, and when the time was right grab the key out of the Master’s study.
Long after all the students had gone to bed, Darius quietly slipped out of his shared quarters and went to the solitude of the library. The vast reading room of the library was empty, the rows of books standing on their shelves stoically, like a silent sentry guarding the room.
Although his feet were slippered, he still winced at the echoes his footfalls made. Shuffling quietly to the closest table, Darius quietly opened the old tome, clenching his teeth as the ancient leather binding creaked. He flipped through a few pages; irritated moved the candle he had closer to see better. After an hour or so, he was beginning to give up hope that the charm would be catalogued in the book.
He leaned back and rubbed his eyes, and absent mindedly flipped the book to its last page with one finger, his eyes widened. Leaning forward squinting in the low light, he cracked a smile. The bastards put it on the last page, must have been the most recent artifact catalogued.
Running his finger under the flowing script of the description, he read in a low whisper.
“The Globe of Seeing. Ancient crystal globe, crafted by magi of the Black Robes in and around the Age of Enlightenment (see footnote 98 for listing of names and dates). The powers of the Globe are still mostly unknown to us. What is known however is that the Globe provides the user insight to any subject he/she so desires. Common sense would tell us that this would prove an invaluable tool to archivists and historians. However, study has shown that a mage of the White Robes is not truly capable to wield its power, no matter his level of skill and rank in the Art. An unfortunate member of our ranks attempted to harness the power of the Globe, and quickly went insane. We cannot know for certain if it is possible for one of our ranks to control it, and do not wish to further sacrifice important members of our society in further study.
Information acquired from captured members of the Black Robes has told us that there is no information or knowledge withheld from the wielder of this Globe. Therefore it was decided the Globe must be kept in safe keeping by our ranks in order to keep this powerful and valuable tool and artifact from the clutches of the Black Robes.”
Darius leaned back and rubbed his chin. The description had scared him a bit, but this was his only chance. Well I am not exactly a white robe yet, most likely it will not affect me as it did the others. The worse than can happen is it will tell me nothing.
Convinced of his plan, Darius nodded to himself and left the library quietly, slipping the tome in his sack. His stride took him right to the Master’s study. The lock was simple enough, however Darius was surprised that there was no magical ward placed on the room. Shrugging to himself, he slipped into the room, and went right to the shelf where he saw the key yesterday.
Reaching up, nearly toppling onto the shelf, he suppressed a yelp of glee when he finally grasped the rock. Quickly he dropped it into his sack and left the room resetting the lock on the door. There were no classes tomorrow, so he would return to his room for a quick nap, and leave for the cave with the rise of the sun.
That was only hours ago, and Darius now wished he had stayed in bed. His feet hurt, sweat stung the scratches and cuts he had received as he drove deeper into the cave. He came to a dead stop when he reached a point where the cavern separated into two tunnels. Raising his arms and then dropping them down in disgust, he plopped on the floor, looking at the two paths.
Now what? Damn, from the way they talked about it, it was just supposed to be a sealed cave, not a damn labyrinth! Shaking his head, he laid it back on the moss covered wall and closed his eyes. He soon cracked one eye open when he saw light through his eyelids. Out of one of the corridors came a blue light, almost pulsating. He smiled and stood, his hope returning. Smugly, he walked into the corridor with the light.
The walk was not long this time, after a short while he entered a large open cavern, one he could not see the ceiling to. It was circular in shape, the walkway going all around the room with a gaping hole in the center. He looked down the chasm, and saw nothing; it was deep enough to where it was shrouded in darkness. Looking up at the source of the light, he saw what he was looking for.
The Globe sat upon a stone dais in the center of the chasm on a small island of sorts. On the other side of the walkway that encircled the chasm was a stone bridge that went across the chasm to the island and the Globe. Wildly he ran around the walkway to the other side. The Globe pulsed greater as he approached the bridge, and he also began to hear some sounds.
Stopping about halfway to the bridge, he looked around trying to decipher the sounds he heard. It was all jumbled; a murmur. He continued his way around, this time walking slowly. He noticed as he got closer, the murmur became more understandable. About a quarter of the way to the bridge, he definitely knew it was a voice of a man; the words however were still undeterminable. When he reached the bridge, he looked across its span at the Globe which pulsed frantically now on the dais. The voice now was understandable. He cocked his head to make sure he heard correctly.
“Who seeketh the knowledge of the Globe?”
The sentence was repeated over and over again, like a mantra. Shrugging, he went to place a foot on the bridge. He jumped back with a yelp as he was zapped with a blue shock of magical lightning as his foot touched the bridge. The voice once again rang out, this time with more determination.
He placed his hands on his head and shook it. Can nothing ever be simple! For the first time since he entered the cave, he looked down on himself. He robes were torn, and he had gotten them so dirty they almost looked black now. Shrugging again he decided to answer the disembodied voice.
“I am Darius Waylander! An appr…a Mage. I seek the knowledge of the Globe!” Darius heard a low hum and the first block of the bridge glowed blue. He began to realize what he had to do. Stepping on the first stone, he stopped and looked forward. Ahead of him, he saw three more such stones which made up the bridge, they were dark. He had to most likely answer three more questions before he reached the dais on the other side. Looking up he waited for the voice again. Not soon after the voice echoed through the cavern.
“Why doth thee seek the Globe?” Biting his lip, Darius took a deep breath and thought about this one. Nodding to himself he spoke out to the voice.
“I seek enlightenment. Knowledge that only the Globe can provide!” The next stone glowed blue, Darius stepped forward. Once again the voice rang out.
“Doth the knowledge thee seek in anyway bring harm upon others?” This was not hard; Darius did only plan on using the Globe to help him pass the test. He was thinking about returning it when he passed, but know that he was so close to its power, he thought maybe he would keep it for a while.
Perhaps it could help him make some money, he would need funds to build a tower and stock up on the herbs he would need as a full Mage. That wouldn’t hurt anyone really. It could also protect him from others who wished to him harm. If they got hurt, he would only be
defending himself. Shrugging he accepted his reasons and was convinced he wouldn’t do anything to intentionally hurt someone.
“No. It will cause no other any harm” The next stone glowed blue, he stepped forward. He smile was wide now; he wasn’t that far now and he could smell victory.
“Will thou sacrifice anything to obtain this knowledge?” He had come this far, there was nothing that would stop him now.
“Yes.” The fourth stone glowed blue, and he giggled in delight. Only one more step and he would be on the island with the Globe.
“What is the color of thy robes? Know that only one of the Black Robes may obtain the Globe. If thee are otherwise, thee are free to leave this place.”
Darius’ eyes blinked. He had not expected this. The book said that White Robes had attempted to use the Globe, so it shouldn’t matter what he answered. Seeing it asked that question and he was wearing white robes, Darius decided the voice could not see him, it seemed to be an automatic enchantment that answered and asked with automatic responses.
This was not a right or wrong answer, most likely a fail-safe placed by the White Robes so no one would attempt to take the Globe. Besides, even if it could see him, his robes were dirty enough to look black. There was no harm in answering with a small lie.
“I am of the Black Robes.” The island in which stood the dais glowed blue and Darius stepped forward. He laughed with glee. Reaching out towards the Globe, he jerked back dejected when it zapped him. He muttered a curse and yelled at the disembodied voice. “What is the meaning of this! I have answered your questions and stand before the Globe! It is rightfully mine!”
After a moment, the voice boomed back. “Thy hath sought the Globe and its knowledge. Thy have admitted to sacrificing anything, and sacrificed thine own robes for they were white when thee entered the cave. Thy hath pledged to be now of the Black Robes, and thus the Globe is thine and here is the knowledge you seek. However being of the Black Robes, thee should already know the answer to the question. The more of this there is, the harder it is to see. What is it?”
The Globe grew brightly, and Darius mouth hung open. He did not say he would become one of the Black Robes! What in hell was going on? Snarling he plucked the Globe from the Dais and shook his fist at the voice.
“What does it matter?! I have the Globe, and the robes I wear are merely that, robes.” The voice let out a booming laughter and then spoke once again.
“Thine robes may be only clothing, but they now reflect thy heart and soul, and much like thy heart and soul, the answer is Darkness.” The light of the globe began to sputter. His breath coming in short gasps, Darius knew had to get out of the cave.
He turned towards the bridge and stopped when the stones fell, leaving him stranded on the island. The voice repeated the word darkness, and Darius let out a scream as the Globe’s light flickered and died, shrouding him and the cavern in darkness.
On a grassy knoll overlooking the cave, sat Master Filosar and Master Gravious. They picked at grapes from a basket they brought with them on this beautiful spring day. They watched the blue light that emanated from the cave flicker and die, they both shook their heads. With a rumble they watched the cave collapse upon itself. Turning to Gravious, Master Filosar stood and brushed off his hands and robes.
“A pity. He had potential that boy. Came this far and failed his final exam.” Gravious nodded and also stood beside his colleague.
“A pity indeed. The lure of the Black Robes can be strong, and even among our apprentices it can reach out. However it is better he perished in his Final than to survive and increase the number of our dark counter parts.”
“Very true my friend. Come, the few who have passed their Final now await in the courtyard, let us go congratulate them.”
Taking one last look at the rubble of the cave, the two magi walked away down the knoll to the school below.